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How Doth the Little Crocodile by ~PandaRosi:iconPandaRosi:





How Doth the Little Crocodile

How doth the little crocodile
improve its shining tail,


He smiled. His lips curling up at the corners, so sweetly. A scent of sweat and perhaps dirt, like any boy in the room. A slight glimmer in his eyes betrays mischief. He stared at me as I scraped the day's homework with a stick of chalk upon the dusty board. At least ten years younger than I, and a boy. Why does he stare and smile? Am I so popular among the students that I have merited male admirers as well? I'm not all that. The scenario makes little, or no sense.

But, as I watch and stare back, I realize. He is beautiful.



And pour the waters of the Nile
On every golden scale.


He preens himself elegantly. His shirt button is undone, his tie loosely in place. A perfect view of his slender neck. Running a hand through his hair, he breaks eye contact to pen down the essay subject in a notebook. I'm disconcerted. He turns around to talk to a classmate, and I return to my desk, troubled. The bell rings, and class is finished. The room slowly empties.

How cheerfully he seems to grin,

The room empties, except for one. Him. He walks towards my desk.
"Is there a problem?" I ask, as naturally as I can. My mind tells me to leave, quickly, before becoming involved. Involved?
"Nothing, sir..." he says softly, the playful smile on his lips, "I think I just left something here, that's all." He picks up a small snow-globe on the desk, examining it. I tell him to please leave it, and if there is nothing wrong, he should be on his way to the next lesson. Was it math?

How neatly spreads his jaws,

"You must be very tired, sir." He says, leaning in closer. "School's over. Yours was the last lesson."
I feel a blush viciously spreading up my features. "in...indeed. so you should be on your way home."
"Not quite yet," he whispers, his face inches from mine. "Not quite yet."

And welcomes little fishes in,

I quickly try to move out of the situation, not moving from my desk, but attempting to shove some papers into a bag, making excuses. He silences me with a touch of his hand on my cheek. He's smaller than me, I could push him away easily, but I'm afraid to touch him. He looks so delicate, a porcelain doll.
"don't you want to know what I forgot?"
His eyes and form are hypnotic. My mind screams at me to leave, but instead, I speak. "y-yes..."

With gently smiling jaws.

He leans down across the desk, allowing the snow globe to fall to the floor. It shatters, spilling liquid and glitter across the wooden boards. His eyes now fill my vision, hazel eyes, golden hair. And gently, he presses his lips against mine. Locked in a sinful embrace, I lose myself in the moment and respond. Breaking away slowly, he whispers into my ear.
"I forgot you."
©2005-2009 ~PandaRosi
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Author's Comments

Drabble. Such drabble. I got bored today.. ._.'' i nearly died in maple story, that's why... ^^; This is the first thing i've written since crappy fanfiction. ._.'' and this is as crappy as the fanfiction. please please ignore it... This is also my first writing piece i've put up here on DA.

See... SS-chan writes so well, and for some reason, that made me want to write something. i'm reluctant to put up writing, though. ;_;'' it's weird for me to find people reading it, but i thought i may as well try and improve on it... bleh.

regarding what i was on when writing this: extreme bordeom... i was also hungry. It's BL/shounen-ai/yaoi, whatever (not explicit).. but it's teacher/student stuffus. ._.

and about the Little Crocodile thing.... ^^; erm. don't really ask. ._.'' i used to be obsessed with the poem when i was younger, and i find myself reciting it when i'm nervous. ._.'' so i figured i may as well base my story around it....

and if worst comes to worst, just comment on my oekaki. ok? XD ph33r my silly oekaki! I know the proportions are wrong. ._.'' it needs more shading on the back of his head. ._.

[edit] gaaah. i screwed up the formatting. -_-;;; rar.

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:iconeternitydreams:
:jawdrop: you wrote this....dude...it's good what do you mean drabble, okay I have no idea what's going on at all, but it's scary, and I mean in a way that sends shivers up my spine. You're dissin' your stuff again *hits you with book* stop it, I like it..oh and the picture too, but what's happening? Need more information!

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I'm not in denial. I'm just very selective of the reality that I wish to accept.

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Run, RUN! She's not stressing! She's PMSing!!!

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:iconlee-san-onee-san:
O_O O_OO_O I was just wondering... say if /someone/ wrote something like this for their creative writing exam ....would they fail?
Cuss damn this is good.....

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Sas-GAY?..Sas-UKE...So-GHEY?.. Sassy-Cake?... Oh...Sasuke! D:
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:iconshinobisquirrelchan:
Nyaaa, it's sooooo good~~~~!! :heart: So cuuuuute~ Reminds me of Passion. Kinda. ^^ Though sweeter and fluffier.

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Icon share with ~PandaRosi-sama~! :heart:

者は、アトベです!

A leader in the Church of Fangirlism. We're all sinners here. :D
:iconpandarosi:
^^; you... think it's good? ehhh.. it's weird.... hahah. scary? XD why is it scary? tell me! i'm sorry for dissing my stuff again. ;_;'' i just never think it's good... ^^;

what's happening? in a nutshell: "teacher gets seduced by student"....

yeah. *sweatdrops and runs away*

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I miss you, ~ShinobiSquirrelChan...
:icongbeanjuice:
ooooh i love it! i started singing this little song i used to know to those words...student snaps up teacher...kukukuku ^__^

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Gojyo: That being the case, what's up with that? Over there, that self centered, air of importance carrying bastard!
Hakkai: That's Sanzo.
Gojyo: I KNOW THAT! Why the hell is he here?
Sanzo: There isn't any coffee in the temple.
:iconeternitydreams:
Oh...o..0; OH! Oh it's good, and erhm, a bit scary yes, but that doesn't really matter you know, I am intrigued, you should continue it, or at least write another, I liked the description about the stick of chalk! But OMG, what made you write that! Heheh, and who is the boy, it was a good piccy by the way! *commends you* !

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I'm not in denial. I'm just very selective of the reality that I wish to accept.

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Run, RUN! She's not stressing! She's PMSing!!!

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:icondark-cobweb:
O_O...ooh, thats goooood. The whole schoolboy thing freaks me out slightly, but its a nice play on the dominant submissive thing.

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"Power is in tearing human minds to pieces and putting them back together again in new shapes of your own choosing."
:iconpandarosi:
i have no idea. the examiner might be very very freaked out.... :P

thanks, though. XD

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I miss you, ~ShinobiSquirrelChan...
:iconpandarosi:
lol. sweeter and fluffier? heheh. i'm glad you like it. ^^- :heart:

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I miss you, ~ShinobiSquirrelChan...

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